Name: Kellie29 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 01:39 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
What do you mean "the end?" It was just getting started. I wish you would continue this. I love stories like this and how they develope and end. Please reconsider and keep going...loved it so far!
Name: Kellie29 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:50 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
This is getting really good! I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens. I only wish the chapters were a little longer, but other than that...excellent!!!
thanks...will keep it in mind. a little busy but i am trying to finish this. university is a killer though, eh...
Name: snuke (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 07:54 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
Name: blonde (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 04:41 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
I thought the way you had them jump from holding hands to full-on making out was plausible. They are young guys and their emotions and hormones are all over the place. It made total sense IMO. I love the premise of the camp being a "solution." By the way, I have brown eyes too but I prefer to think of Luke as having hazel as well. LOL. Great story. :)
he does have hazel...thats the funny thing and i do think it's completely normal for the hot and cold emotion. we were all teens once, i know i've been there, and i've done it, as bad as that may sound. haha. so thank you.
Name: Emilee1993 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:20 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
Dude....is it just me or are all your chapters titled after songs?
i'm not a dude...but yes, thank you for catching on---And if you noticed, "Caught on fire" is part of a lyric, the entire lyric being the entire inspiration
"Two weeks and we had caught on fire...."
-Paramore, Misery Business
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 05:04 pm · For: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
oh no, poor luke, his heart is broken now. hoping that noah will tell him the truth about his father. please continue as soon as possible.
i realize not all reviews can be good....but i love you for that :)...it's done, i just have to upload...it gets darker before it gets better, but...doesn't everything?
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:46 pm · For: Chapter 2: It's Just a Little Crush
just wondering why luke has green eyes in this story. as far as i remember his eyes are brown. but i guess you can take artistic license, it is your story. so far i'm loving how noah can smell luke and think he smells great and has incredible eyes, but noah insists he's not gay. wow, if all straight guys looked at other straight guys that way, the world would never procreate :}
hmmm...what can i say? i have brown eyes, my bf has brown eyes, my 3 wonderful children have brown eyes.hell, 98% of this town has brown eyes. quite frankly, they just don't appeal to me. besides, i think luke is more hazel anyway. we both win :)
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:43 pm · For: Chapter 1: So Small
wow, this is a really interesting point of view on luke and degaying camp. i like it. loved that luke was kicking and screaming at damian, that was inspired. wish he'd kicked him in the kneecap.
Name: rarewoman78 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 08:32 am · For: Chapter 3: Follow Me
I LOVE THE STORYLINE PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON. THEY NEED TO BE HAPPY AND LIVING A LIFE TOGETHER.
working on it feverishly :)) will post soon
Name: DarkMatter (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 05:26 am · For: Chapter 1: So Small
This is a fun read! I'm hooked :)
ahh, thank you. thank you. i'll try to keep it up.
Name: snuke (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:00 pm · For: Chapter 3: Follow Me
I`m very much enjoying this story.
awesome. i'm really, so glad.
Name: Emilee1993 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 06:37 pm · For: Chapter 3: Follow Me
I like it.
a real compliment coming from you. i'm a fan of your work =)