Name: troncosoxl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2016 08:49 pm · For: Chapter 1
amazing!! i still remember the first time i read this and got hooked with ur entire LA series. Greetings
Name: Valenti1965 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2013 09:12 am · For: Chapter 1
An I finally read a fic in the LA series! And oh wow Noahs pain was painful to read but I can totally understand Luke's hesitation, he was hurt badly.
Name: bebe11 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 06:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
Great start. I liked the trailer on YouTube as well.
Author's Response: Ah thanks... I hope you enjoy the rest of the series too... let me know your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed the trailer too...
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:56 pm · For: Chapter 1
You mentioned in your comments to another review that this was your first story, Nukefic or otherwise... and you're off to a good start. You have some flow issues, and there's places where you use parenthesis to offset comments that could be done more elegantly in other ways, but for an initial story, it's the story that counts most... because the way of telling the story is something that improves with practice.
It's engaging for me in part because this is the part of fan fiction that I like... the "what happened next" in a series that ended earlier than it needed to.
Oh you started already! :-)
Personally I don't think this series really takes off until Separation as when I wrote the first few one-shots I had no idea how big this was going to become... When I look back now I cringe at these and often think I should change them. But in the end I guess there's no point... Most people have read them already anyway...
Name: koukla (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 12:52 pm · For: Chapter 1
Lovely story...can get enough of it,it's like i am still looking at the series....
this is the way i imagened the story to go on...great job...keep on writing....
Hi Koukla! Welcome to Nukefic and thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you like this... please let me know your thoughts on the rest of the stories too... I love to hear from readers as it gives me ideas on what works and what doesn't. I wrote the LA Series as a way to give Nukies a continuation of the Nuke story so I'm pleased you think I've done that... it's my baby really... LOL! Enjoy!
Name: Loahisi (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 10:43 am · For: Chapter 1
I know I never comment but seeing the post on LJ and since I don't have anything to read at the moment I will read it again. It's the third times I think and I still love it. It's not like in the other where they found each other again and everything is great from the start, it's realistic and I love that.
WOW! Thanks Mathilde... It's such a great compliment... especially to hear that you are reading it a fourth time! LOL! I hope you enjoy it just as much this time around...
And thanks for the comment :-)
Name: buttercup (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
Have been reading this series for a few days, but decided to go back and catch up on my reviews.
So glad to see they found their way back to each other. Luke finally started standing up for Luke, instead of doing what he thought Noah wanted. I think that was a big part of what caused the breakup. Noah had gotten away with pushing him away all those other times, and Luke always was standing there waiting for him. This time Luke grew up!
I think they'll have a much better chance at forever now that they've both had to mature.
I'm glad you saw this in the story. This was my first ever story... Nuke or otherwise... so it's maybe not my best work, but I'm pleased some people understand what I was trying to say... thanks for the comment!
Name: alexxgalaxy (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 04:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
wow, Noah was so desperate to keep Luke. The way he asked him to stay was...it's close to begging. Normally the demonstration of such degree of desperation would make me turn my eye away but I kind of like his desperation this time. It showed his determination, how much he wanted to keep Luke. It was like if he was to beg, he would do it without hesitation. Seriously, with him begging like that, there was no way Luke could say no. I always admire the spirit and willpower of those who were determined to achieve.
Thanks alex... I'm so pleased you enjoyed it enough to comment... I hope you continue the LA Series... I think the stories improve somewhat with practice... This one was the first thing I EVER wrote...
It's really nice of you to read it!
Name: comicgirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 04:42 am · For: Chapter 1
o,k i love it thank-you !!!
WOW! Am I your first NUKEFic review? Thanks so much... really honoured! And thanks for the great rating and for commenting on every chapter! Seriously nice of you...!!
Name: Lefty Wright (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 02:45 pm · For: Chapter 1
Nice! The story flowed with emotion and remained true to the characters.
Wow! I'm honoured to be your fist review! :-) Welcome to Nukefic! Thanks so much for your kind words, I hope you continue to read and enjoy The LA Series... :-)
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 06:20 am · For: Chapter 1
so i lost track and started from scratch
gosh what an amazing beginning
so much love there and so sincere
OMG Danielle! I can't believe you are reading this all the way from the beginning LOL! I'm honoured! Thanks :-)
Name: Santasorted (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:10 am · For: Chapter 1
Amazing! Love how both have separate conflicts but yet still want each other... Beautiful!
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 02:06 am · For: Chapter 1
Thanks so much!
Name: snuke (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 07:06 pm · For: Chapter 1
Yes they are destined to be one of the other.
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:35 am · For: Chapter 1
I loved this! The way you showed Luke's fear of being hurt by Noah again yet still wanting and loving him, and how Noah had really changed but just couldn't move on without Luke -- perfect! Really, really beautiful story.
Hi ficnic! So pleased you enjoyed it...
Name: Tonya (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:32 am · For: Chapter 1
Wow, was this your first Nuke fic?
It's so wonderfully sad! Thank you so much for posting! I hope you continue writing!
This is my first... anything. I've never attempted to write a coherent story before although I've always had a love for literature and reading.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: Aspirwriter (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:30 am · For: Chapter 1
Nice oneshot, very tender. Certainly sounds like Luke is attempting to forgive Noah for hurting him. Wonder if Noah can forget what Luke did to him?
Thanks Tom :-)
Name: jollyholly (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:07 am · For: Chapter 1
Perfect!!! Love that they talked about their issues..I so desperatly wanted to see that on the show..Noah admitting his mistakes & begging for another chance..fighting for Luke..anywho, just loved this lots!
Hi jollyholly, I'm glad I got to give you what you wanted from the show! More too come...
Name: newhaven (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:02 am · For: Chapter 1
“I’m sorry. I can’t help it. It’s… it’s…you’re in here, Luke.” Noah banged his fist against his chest and the look of love and longing in his blue eyes caused something inside Luke to snap. "
Loved these lines...along with the whole story. Congrats on an excellent debut.